If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why?
Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Sample essay 1.
Back to January 19th,2002
Till now, there is only one thing that makes me feel repentant of. My girlfriend died in Japan, and
at that time I was doing my TOEFL test. If I could go back to some time and place in the past, I
choose to go back to January 19th 2002...
I will use a story to show the reasons for choosing this time in the past. My girlfriend's was
Christina. Her father is Japanese, and her mother is Chinese. That is why she looks as beautiful as
an angel. Last winter vacation, I was preparing for the TOEFL test. Of course, I did not pay
enough time for her as usual. I only saw her for twice a month. The night before the TOEFL test,
she came to my house. I enjoyed her cooking, and everything looked fine as usual. The next
morning, she cooked the breakfast for me.
Before I left, she kissed me and said " Jackey, good luck. I love you!" I replied: "Thanks, honey! I
love you, too." The test goes fine. After the test, my cell phone rang as I turned it on. It is one of
my best friends Moon. He said " Jackey, Christina went back to Japan. She tried to kill herself.
Now she is in the hospital and she is in danger period. You must arrive to the airport in three
minutes. The visa, passport and the air ticket are in the car. You have to come to Japan right now.
We will see you in Japan!"
When I saw her, she said, " I think your business is more important than me. I do not think you
need me any more! Goodbye, forever." She sleeps forever. If I go back to the time, I will stay with
her and spend much more time on her. I even can drop my business.
In fact, it is impossible for backing that time! Christina is died. There is not another Christina for
me, but will have four times per year for the TOEFL test. The lost would never be back.
Sample essay 2.
If I were afforded the opportunity to go back to a specific time and place in the past, I would
venture back to ancient Greece. During the 5th century B.C., the Greeks were in the process of
developing and reforming a wide range of cultural, social, and scientific pursuits which still have a
significant impact on the world today.
In the arts, Greece excelled in many fields, particularly dramatic literature. The works of
Sophocles, Euripides and Aristophanes have had a tremendous influence not only on western
literature, but also western thought in general. The works of these playwrights are still performed
on stages around the world today. However, it would be a rare and exciting opportunity to see
these plays performed for the first time.
The ancient Greeks also excelled in the social sciences. Perhaps their greatest contribution in this
area came in the form of democracy. The Greek words "Demo" and "Cracy" mean "People" and
"Rule" respectively. Today, many of the world's great nations have adopted, and to a certain
extent, modified the ancient Greek system. Yet, its birth and early maturation period all took
place in ancient Greece.
Academic subjects such as Philosophy, Astronomy, Physics and Biology also received a great deal
of attention in the ancient Greek world. The philosophical writings of Heraclitus, Plato, and
Aristotle have had a profound influence on western scholarship for well over two thousand years.
The Mathematical theories of Pythagoras and Euclid, combined with theories from other great
ancient civilizations, provided a foundation upon which later mathematicians such as Newton and
Einstein based their work.
The world of the Ancient Greeks would most certainly be an exciting and stimulating place to go
back to. Politics, Drama, Physics, and a number of other subjects were still in their infancy, and
all were being fiercely debated and examined. It would undoubtedly be and enriching experience
to observe and take part in such a fascinating civilization.
Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Sample essay 1.
Back to January 19th,2002
Till now, there is only one thing that makes me feel repentant of. My girlfriend died in Japan, and
at that time I was doing my TOEFL test. If I could go back to some time and place in the past, I
choose to go back to January 19th 2002...
I will use a story to show the reasons for choosing this time in the past. My girlfriend's was
Christina. Her father is Japanese, and her mother is Chinese. That is why she looks as beautiful as
an angel. Last winter vacation, I was preparing for the TOEFL test. Of course, I did not pay
enough time for her as usual. I only saw her for twice a month. The night before the TOEFL test,
she came to my house. I enjoyed her cooking, and everything looked fine as usual. The next
morning, she cooked the breakfast for me.
Before I left, she kissed me and said " Jackey, good luck. I love you!" I replied: "Thanks, honey! I
love you, too." The test goes fine. After the test, my cell phone rang as I turned it on. It is one of
my best friends Moon. He said " Jackey, Christina went back to Japan. She tried to kill herself.
Now she is in the hospital and she is in danger period. You must arrive to the airport in three
minutes. The visa, passport and the air ticket are in the car. You have to come to Japan right now.
We will see you in Japan!"
When I saw her, she said, " I think your business is more important than me. I do not think you
need me any more! Goodbye, forever." She sleeps forever. If I go back to the time, I will stay with
her and spend much more time on her. I even can drop my business.
In fact, it is impossible for backing that time! Christina is died. There is not another Christina for
me, but will have four times per year for the TOEFL test. The lost would never be back.
Sample essay 2.
If I were afforded the opportunity to go back to a specific time and place in the past, I would
venture back to ancient Greece. During the 5th century B.C., the Greeks were in the process of
developing and reforming a wide range of cultural, social, and scientific pursuits which still have a
significant impact on the world today.
In the arts, Greece excelled in many fields, particularly dramatic literature. The works of
Sophocles, Euripides and Aristophanes have had a tremendous influence not only on western
literature, but also western thought in general. The works of these playwrights are still performed
on stages around the world today. However, it would be a rare and exciting opportunity to see
these plays performed for the first time.
The ancient Greeks also excelled in the social sciences. Perhaps their greatest contribution in this
area came in the form of democracy. The Greek words "Demo" and "Cracy" mean "People" and
"Rule" respectively. Today, many of the world's great nations have adopted, and to a certain
extent, modified the ancient Greek system. Yet, its birth and early maturation period all took
place in ancient Greece.
Academic subjects such as Philosophy, Astronomy, Physics and Biology also received a great deal
of attention in the ancient Greek world. The philosophical writings of Heraclitus, Plato, and
Aristotle have had a profound influence on western scholarship for well over two thousand years.
The Mathematical theories of Pythagoras and Euclid, combined with theories from other great
ancient civilizations, provided a foundation upon which later mathematicians such as Newton and
Einstein based their work.
The world of the Ancient Greeks would most certainly be an exciting and stimulating place to go
back to. Politics, Drama, Physics, and a number of other subjects were still in their infancy, and
all were being fiercely debated and examined. It would undoubtedly be and enriching experience
to observe and take part in such a fascinating civilization.
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