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Topic 43. Have you experienced the fear of bungee jumping? Have you ever enjoyed the excitement of car racing? Nowadays, more and more people are attracted to such dangerous activities, especially the young people. Wondering why? After thinking about the lifestyle of those people, the reason goes as follows.

Have you experienced the fear of bungee jumping? Have you ever enjoyed the excitement of car
racing? Nowadays, more and more people are attracted to such dangerous activities, especially the
young people. Wondering why? After thinking about the lifestyle of those people, the reason goes
as follows.

Sample essay 1.

While the world is becoming more and more competitive, the task on each person’s shoulder
becomes heavier and heavier. People’s activity everyday is very intense and they get more and
more burdened after days of hard work. So everyone wants a release and the best way to relax
and get relieved is to do the dangerous activities, because while you are doing something
dangerous, you have to be concentrated on it, and you can’t think about anything else. Hence you
relieved all the unhappiness and the troubles you had in daily work.

In addition, to take risks and try out new things is one of human being’s basic instincts. People
always like to do something new, especially when something is popular as well. According to
some stastistics, the dangerous activities are becoming extremely popular among young people. If
you don’t try some dangerous activities, people will think that you are a coward and afraid of
doing it. So it’s reasonable enough for them to do dangerous activities to show their braveness.

However, I don’t like dangerous activities and I believe the phenomenon that people are attracted
to dangerous activities is just a whim. After realizing countless disadvantages of them, people will
reconsider about them. Some safer activities to help people to get relieved will be developed
afterwards.

(This is a 5 point essay)

Sample essay 2.

Dangerous sports or activities attract a certain type of person. This person is often a risk taker, an
optimist, and a fatalist.

People who take risks are found both in dangerous sports and business. But it is a special person
who takes a risk with his own life as opposed to his money. My father was a risk taker. He put
everything he owned into his business, but he stopped playing risky sports like horseback riding
and skiing. Once his business was a success and he no longer had to worry about providing for us,
he returned, at the age of 60, to the risky sports that he did as a youth.

Someone who plays dangerous sports must be an optimist. They cannot imagine that anything will
happen to them. They never think about breaking their leg while skiing, falling off a cliff while
rock climbing, fatting on their head while sky diving. They live for the thrill of the moment
without a thought to the many things that could go wrong.

Rock climbers and sports car drivers must be fatalist. They might plan for potential problems, but
once they have done everything they can do, the outcome is out of their hands. A motorcyclist
who jumps across a narrow canyon will get the fastest, strongest bike available that will carry him
or her across the canyon. However, wind conditions or other problems might interfere and the
cyclist may fall short of his goal.

Many people have the same traits of course. Many of us are risk takers, optimists, and fatalists.
But I think people who play dangerous sports must have these characteristics in abundance.

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